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Another very nice work from you.

I love the use of light in this one. It's very well done. Bright where it should be with shadows.

I would like a little more light in the exposed eye. It's one of those things I was shown by a photo instructor and I see it now. If there's an eye exposed, it needs to be visible. That's just a personal thing.

Something I do not like is the visible marks from a bra. I think it might be better if the skin were smoother. Bra lines and panty lines are an enemy to the photographer. When these elements are not wanted in a photo, it's a good idea to have the model remove them a few hours before the shoot. Spending the before-shoot time in sweats or loose clothing is a good way to let the skin smooth out from those lines.

Overall I like this shot. It's very well composed and lit, and not too revealing. Well done.
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